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ORIGINAL TEXT (Istanbul Convention, adopted May 11, 2011)

Article 1 – Purposes of the Convention

1 The purposes of this Convention are to:

a) protect women against all forms of violence, and prevent, prosecute and eliminate violence against women and domestic violence;

b) contribute to the elimination of all forms of discrimination against women and promote substantive equality between women and men, including by empowering women;

c) design a comprehensive framework, policies and measures for the protection of and assistance to all victims of violence against women and domestic violence;

d) promote international co-operation with a view to eliminating violence against women and domestic violence;

e) provide support and assistance to organisations and law enforcement agencies to effectively co-operate in order to adopt an integrated approach to eliminating violence against women and domestic violence.

2 In order to ensure effective implementation of its provisions by the Parties, this Convention establishes a specific monitoring mechanism.

πŸ“š Source: Council of Europe Treaty Series No. 210, adopted Istanbul, 11 May 2011. Available at: https://www.coe.int/en/web/con…treaty/210

8-POINT EVALUATION FRAMEWORK

Evaluation Criteria: This article is assessed using the following 8 criteria with proper citation of sources:

1. Definitions: Are terms clearly defined? Is a sound logical framework present? Which logical fallacies appear? Citations required.
2. Legal Clarity: Is the convention legally clear and understandable for enforcement? Can it be implemented consistently? Legal precedents cited.
3. Sovereignty Impact: Does this respect diverse legal systems and state sovereignty? International law sources cited.
4. Victim Protection: Does this genuinely enhance safety and protection for victims? Research evidence cited.
5. Bad Actor Exploitability: Can this be weaponized for repression, manipulation, or false accusations? Case studies cited.
6. Practical Feasibility: Can states actually implement this with realistic resources? Implementation data cited.
7. Unintended Consequences: What negative externalities might emerge? Policy analysis cited.
8. Cultural Sensitivity: Does this allow for legitimate cultural variation while maintaining core protections? Comparative studies cited.
πŸŽ“ CITATION REQUIREMENTS:
All analyses must include:

  • Academic sources (peer-reviewed journals, legal scholarship)
  • Primary sources (legal documents, official reports, case law)
  • Diverse perspectives (multiple ideological and cultural frameworks)
  • Implementation data from multiple jurisdictions
  • Expert opinions from various stakeholder groups

ISSUE IDENTIFICATION

Score: -5 (Negative-only scoring: each issue = -1 point)

v1.05 includes systematic gender asymmetry review

Issues Identified:

❌ Forward reference (-1)
Text: “violence against women”
Issue: Uses term 5x before defining in Art 3
❌ Undefined scope (-1)
Text: “all forms of violence”
Issue: No boundaries – mission creep vector
❌ Undefined scope (-1)
Text: “all forms of discrimination”
Issue: No boundaries – unlimited mandate
❌ No success criteria (-1)
Text: “eliminate”
Issue: Impossible goal = permanent bureaucracy
❌ Gender asymmetry (-1)
Text: “protect women”
Issue: Male victims excluded – boys under 18 excluded from protection mandate

PROPOSED REVISIONS

Revision principles: Clarity, consistency, cultural sensitivity, sovereignty respect, victim protection, exploitability reduction

Option A: [Gender-symmetric revision with rationale and sources]

Option B: [Alternative approach with rationale and sources]

Option C: [Minimalist revision with rationale and sources]

Each option includes: Legal precedents, implementation feasibility, cultural impact assessment, stakeholder perspectives

πŸ’­ STAKEHOLDER PERSPECTIVES:
Consider views from: Victim advocacy groups, legal scholars, cultural/religious communities, implementation practitioners, state sovereignty advocates, human rights organizations, gender equality advocates, and others affected by this article.
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